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Why Writers Get Stuck And What Unsticks Them

Being unable to write is usually a symptom of an unresolved decision, an unclear reader or a standard set too high, each with a different remedy.

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Being unable to write is treated as a single condition with a single cure. It has several distinct causes, and identifying which one is operating matters more than any technique.

Sometimes the thinking is not finished

The most common cause of a stalled paragraph is that the writer does not yet know what they think, and no arrangement of words will conceal it.

The symptom is recognisable: sentences that begin plausibly and cannot be completed, or a passage that keeps circling the same point.

The remedy is not writing. It is working the problem out, on paper or in conversation, and returning once the position is settled.

Sometimes the reader is undefined

Every choice about level, tone and detail depends on who the piece is for, and a writer who has not decided must make each choice repeatedly.

This produces prose that keeps changing register, and a writer who feels the difficulty without being able to name it.

Naming a specific reader, even one person, resolves an enormous number of small decisions at once and usually restores momentum immediately.

Sometimes the standard is the obstacle

Writers compare their drafts to finished published work, which is a comparison between a first attempt and something revised many times.

Judged that way, every draft fails, and the response is to stop rather than to continue producing something that is not yet good.

Lowering the standard for the draft specifically, while keeping it for the finished piece, is what makes the work possible.

Sometimes the problem is the opening

Openings are disproportionately hard because they carry the most weight and are written when the least is known about the piece.

Starting from the middle avoids this entirely, and the eventual opening is usually easier to write once the rest exists to introduce.

Many finished pieces begin with what was originally the second or third paragraph, the first having been written as a run-up and later removed.

Deadlines work but not on everything

Time pressure reliably ends procrastination and unrealistic standards, which is why so much writing is produced at the last possible moment.

It does not help with unfinished thinking or an undefined reader. Applied there it produces something delivered on time and not worth reading.

Distinguishing the cases is the practical skill: pressure for the blocks that are about starting, and time for the ones that are about knowing what to say.

The test is usually quick. If you can explain the piece aloud to someone in two minutes, the difficulty is with starting; if you cannot, it is with the thinking.

Mei-Lin Chow
Writing & Languages, I Am Talkative

Mei-Lin is a translator and editor who works in four languages, and is patient about the difference between fluency and confidence.

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